application letter

Is there anybody out there in opm land that would be willing look over an application letter. Or be able to suggest somebody that would have a good insight on what to keep/leave out.

Thank you

Judy is the resident expert when it comes to this. She has been involved with medical school admissions and knows what to look for and what needs to be improved. I also have a friend that owns a test prep company look over mine as well, he has an excellent record at getting his clients into ivy league schools. Best of luck.

Thank you.